In the essay from the second semester, I did better than the first essay. In the structure and organization part, I used clear and consistent arguments and persuasive strategies. I use paragraph that make the essay more organized. But I did bad in the command of language part, I still have grammar error in the essay.
Sunday, May 22, 2011
ELA GPS Rubric...
In the essay from the first semester, I did better in structure and organization than in command of language. I have a clear and consistent arguments, and I have a personal story in my story. But I did worse in the Command of language part, because my grammars are very poor. I have lots of grammar error in the essay, and I did not use many vocabulary in my essay. It can not catch reader's eyes.
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