Tuesday, May 24, 2011
senior plan
We will be a senior next semester, I want to review the college list and go to visit them if I can. Then apply for the college before the deadline. I want to retake the SAT test and try to take the ACT test. I also want to apply the grants and scholarships as soon as I can.
Texas Common Application
Topic B- Chose an issue of importance to you—the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope—and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation. (see option #2 below for tips how to write this essay)
I have no idea why my farther was so busy all the time. He never have time to go to my school meeting, or any school activities. He is so strange in my life. In my memory, he never care about me and he never stay home with me.
My dad was crazy about drinks. It doesn't matter what kind of wine. He just love it. He can drinks four times a day. Even though its breakfast, he can drinks with eating bread. Wine is his family that he can not forget about it. When he drinks too much, he will show the feeling which is hard to say it out. He has lots of action to show his feeling. For example, when he was very happy, he will laugh like a crazy people, when he was upset, he will hit others.
I remember that was my second year in middle school, my grade was around ten in the class most of the time. But I got terrible grade at the final exam. It was the worse grade that I got in my life. I can not say anything word about my test. I did not know how to tell my score to my parents. I think they will get mad and did not let me go out to play, just stay home to study until I get the better grade. At that time, I just have a idea in my mind, hide the grade sheet and tell them I get a good grade in my grade sheet but I lost it. I think I am smart enough to lie to them, that is the better way to solve the problem. Two days later, nothing happen. I am so happen that I start to play my computer games. My dad came home with drinks. he open my room without knock the door, then said:"Where is your grade sheet? why are you did not show us ?" I was so shot that shock why my dad know about the grade sheet. I did not say any word. He was angry that I did not answer his question. He was snapped to my face, a big palm print on my face. He continue said:" The teacher just told me about that, We are so disappointed with you. Tell me what happen ! " I can not answer, I started to cried. My dad saw me cried, he went out and close the door hardly. I can not stop crying, I have been crying for the whole night. I can not understood my dad's action. I think everyone has mistake, the way that he did never teach me a lesson. but when I think about the reason that he snapped, because he care about me, he wanted me to improve the grade and get a better grade next time. He just use the wrong way to show it.
I accepted he because he is my father, even though sometimes he will hit me, but it is because he love me, he just use the wrong way to show his love.
I have no idea why my farther was so busy all the time. He never have time to go to my school meeting, or any school activities. He is so strange in my life. In my memory, he never care about me and he never stay home with me.
My dad was crazy about drinks. It doesn't matter what kind of wine. He just love it. He can drinks four times a day. Even though its breakfast, he can drinks with eating bread. Wine is his family that he can not forget about it. When he drinks too much, he will show the feeling which is hard to say it out. He has lots of action to show his feeling. For example, when he was very happy, he will laugh like a crazy people, when he was upset, he will hit others.
I remember that was my second year in middle school, my grade was around ten in the class most of the time. But I got terrible grade at the final exam. It was the worse grade that I got in my life. I can not say anything word about my test. I did not know how to tell my score to my parents. I think they will get mad and did not let me go out to play, just stay home to study until I get the better grade. At that time, I just have a idea in my mind, hide the grade sheet and tell them I get a good grade in my grade sheet but I lost it. I think I am smart enough to lie to them, that is the better way to solve the problem. Two days later, nothing happen. I am so happen that I start to play my computer games. My dad came home with drinks. he open my room without knock the door, then said:"Where is your grade sheet? why are you did not show us ?" I was so shot that shock why my dad know about the grade sheet. I did not say any word. He was angry that I did not answer his question. He was snapped to my face, a big palm print on my face. He continue said:" The teacher just told me about that, We are so disappointed with you. Tell me what happen ! " I can not answer, I started to cried. My dad saw me cried, he went out and close the door hardly. I can not stop crying, I have been crying for the whole night. I can not understood my dad's action. I think everyone has mistake, the way that he did never teach me a lesson. but when I think about the reason that he snapped, because he care about me, he wanted me to improve the grade and get a better grade next time. He just use the wrong way to show it.
I accepted he because he is my father, even though sometimes he will hit me, but it is because he love me, he just use the wrong way to show his love.
Financial Aid
Financial Aid is funds provided to students and families to help pay for postsecondary educational expenses. I want to apply for the grants and scholarships. I do not want to loan money for the college, because I hate to pay the money back. I want to apply as many grants and scholarships as I can. That I do not need to worry about money when I go to college.
Monday, May 23, 2011
Essay about College
The college that I want to attending is Houston Community College. Houston Community College is locate in Houston Taxes. It have about 50,000 students in the school and have about 2,500 academic staff. It has 58.0 overall score, and has 17:1 student ratio.The Houston Community College System offers a wide array of degrees, including associate’s degrees, terminal degrees and also offers non-degree options,continuing education courses, community education, and corporate training modules.Major areas of study at Houston Community College include: Agriculture, Food & Natural Resources, Architecture & Construction, Arts, AV Technology & Communications, Business, Education & Schools, Government & Public Service, Manufacturing, Health & Medical Sciences, Hospitality & Tourism, Human Services & Social Sciences, Information Technology, Science, Technology, Engineering & Mathematics, and Transportation & Logistics. I want to choice this college because this college is cheaper than other college. It total cost about 3,000 on campus attendance. also Houston Community College is closed to my house, that I do not need to live in the school hostel, it can save more money.
My major is cosmetology and barbering, because I am interest in this kind of stuff, I love to make others look beauty, also I want to learn some nail design. I want to learn everything about beauty. I think there have many this kind of jobs in the future. The Cosmetology Program is good in this college, it offer practical instruction designed to prepare a student for employment as a licensed cosmetologist. I believe that hair design and nail design are the art form. This course including classroom lectures, hands-on lab assignments, guest artist presentations, field trips and practical applications. Student who are finish the course, you can go to take the examination for licensing given by the Texas Department of Licensing and Regulation.
My major is cosmetology and barbering, because I am interest in this kind of stuff, I love to make others look beauty, also I want to learn some nail design. I want to learn everything about beauty. I think there have many this kind of jobs in the future. The Cosmetology Program is good in this college, it offer practical instruction designed to prepare a student for employment as a licensed cosmetologist. I believe that hair design and nail design are the art form. This course including classroom lectures, hands-on lab assignments, guest artist presentations, field trips and practical applications. Student who are finish the course, you can go to take the examination for licensing given by the Texas Department of Licensing and Regulation.
Reflection
I will go to college about one more year. Before that, I research some colleges online. I know difference college has different major. We need to learn basic class before we learn the major class. There have many types of Financial Aid that we can apply for college. Scholarships and grants are the best way to get money for the college. We do not need to worry about do not have enough money to go to college, and we have more time to study. That have many activity in college. For example, sports, club, activities. there have many sports in college, tennis, basketball, football, baseball. You will have fun in the school. We can learn something that we interesting in the college.
I still have some questions about college that I don't get that. For example, how can we count the college credit? Is one class for one credit? And how many credit that we can graduation?
I still have some questions about college that I don't get that. For example, how can we count the college credit? Is one class for one credit? And how many credit that we can graduation?
Sunday, May 22, 2011
reflection about my writing
The essays that I wrote in this year, There had many grammar error and did not have many vocabulary. I need to use more strong vocabulary word in my essay, that can catch reader's eye. I also need to read more books, that I can correct my grammar error. I hope I can improve my essay next year. so I don't need to worry about write essays.
ELA GPS Rubric...
In the essay from the first semester, I did better in structure and organization than in command of language. I have a clear and consistent arguments, and I have a personal story in my story. But I did worse in the Command of language part, because my grammars are very poor. I have lots of grammar error in the essay, and I did not use many vocabulary in my essay. It can not catch reader's eyes.
In the essay from the second semester, I did better than the first essay. In the structure and organization part, I used clear and consistent arguments and persuasive strategies. I use paragraph that make the essay more organized. But I did bad in the command of language part, I still have grammar error in the essay.
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